Do some self-exploration.
Your college essay is all about showcasing yourself. Think about which of your strengths and interests you would most like colleges to know about you. What are you passionate about? What’s most important to you? What are you best at?
If you need to pick the topic, be focused and specific.
Writing about a single experience is usually a good idea: Your essay should prove a single point or message. Try to avoid clich� topics like ‘winning a big game’, ‘taking a trip’ or even dealing with a death, these will not help your application stand out from the group.
Show your thoughtfulness.
Be thoughtful in both your topic choice and the tone of your writing. Colleges look for students who have dealt with adversity, have overcome challenges and continue to grow from their experience. Admitting shortcomings is a sign of maturity and intelligence, so there is no need to portray yourself as a superhero, they will see through it.
Get started early.
Self-exploration can be fun, but don’t procrastinate on the actual writing. You don’t want to rush or be up against a tight deadline; it will affect your work.
Create an essay outline.
Sometimes creating an outline for your essay can help you get started. It will also help you organize your thoughts and develop a framework.
Read the instructions and follow them.
Be conscious of any length limits, and, if the topic is provided for you, analyze the question carefully. You want to be aware of everything they ask and answer everything thoroughly.
Use your own voice.
Don’t use big words just for the sake of using big words. They can distract from the essay when misused. Remember, this essay is about you, so use words you would use.
Use quotations and examples to show personal detail.
Instead of just stating your point of view, you want to make your reader feel the experience. Adding detail will help convey your stance. But don’t use quotations simply to use them; make sure they make sense.
Try to be concise.
While adding personal detail is good, you don’t want to be wordy or long-winded; short sentences can be more powerful.
Don’t use slang words.
Generally speaking, slang words conjure the feeling of someone being unpolished, uncaring or not that serious. These are three things you don’t want your admissions reader thinking about you. Likewise, avoid clich�s and overuse of contractions.
The point of this essay is to show who you are, not who you wish you were. Stick to what you know and your true personality will shine through.
Don’t be afraid to use humor if it’s part of who you are.
Admissions officers can have a sense of humor too, and, when used appropriately, humor can make you stand out. However, don’t make being funny one of your top goals in your college essay.
Step away from your essay and come back later.
Sometimes it helps to take a break from your work and come back in a few days. Review what you’ve written and make sure it still makes sense and conveys what you want it to.
Write multiple drafts.
Sometimes you need to write a couple of drafts to get your essay right where you want it.
Type your essay.
No matter how good your essay, if people can’t read your handwriting they won’t appreciate the work.
Proofread your essay.
You want to make sure you’ve used proper spelling, grammar and punctuation, so ask an expert to proofread your essay.
Get feedback from others.
Ask your friends and family to read your essay and tell you what they think. Be open to suggestions and ways to improve it, even if this means going back to the drawing board.
Revise if necessary.
You want to edit your essay down to what is important. Make every word count!
College Admissions Essays
So you think you are done with your college admission essay or personal statement. Wait! You have worked so hard on that essay; it’s worth an extra few minutes to make sure it’s as good as you can make it. I know you are probably sick of it by now, so if you have time set it aside for a day or so. But before you send it out, give it at least one more critical read.
It’s fine if you don’t have all of these elements, but if you have some or most of them, chances are your essay will sing!
A grabber introduction. No? Try reading THIS POST and THIS POST to see if crafting an anecdote at the start will make it more compelling and memorable.
A twist. No? Try THIS POST to learn what these are and how to find them.
A universal truth or life lesson. No? There’s a good chance you already have one, but just didn’t recognize it yet. Read THIS POST to check yours.
A snappy title. No? My advice is to include a title if you can think of a clever one. Otherwise, just leave it out. Read THIS POST to help think of one.
Under word count. No? Read THIS POST to learn how to cut your essay and why it almost always helps.
DON’T PUSH THAT BUTTON YET!!
And make sure to read THIS POST on the steps to take to “fine edit” your college application essay and give it that winning polish!
I’m sure it’s perfect now! Good luck!